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Dude, DON'T UPT THAT DAMN INTRO IN YOUR MUSIC EVER AGAIN! That's like... Worse than me when I was starting out. o_O

After that, it gets really good. You better not've used someone elses song there, or I'll hunt you down & rip your eyes out. XD

Sorry this review couldn't've been better, I'm pretty busy ATM.

~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: Can you please check my latest song, One Final Goodye, for me if you haven't already? Thanks in advance!

Korpze responds:

I think its alright now to say that that intro was supposed to bethere lol for a test to see if people would listen to the whole song, I can see you listen to the whole song b4 reviewing. Thx!

Definately something great

This is an amazing piece. Great work, I especially like the transition at 3:10, as you said, it just gives me a good feeling of accomplishment.

~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: If you haven't already (I can't remember if you did, lol), could you please check out my latest track, One Final Goodye, for me? Thanks!

Mrmilkcarton responds:

I've listened to it a few times 5ing it each time actually :P.

Lol, I remember those MIDI files!

I have the exact MIDIs you used for the melody. Nice use of it. I just don't like how it kept filtering out & back in. I don't hear any bass in this song. This is also pretty repetitive, you need more diversity in this piece.

Thanks for reading
~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: Could you check out my latest track, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks in advance!

Its not techno.

I don't like how there's no percussion, there could atleast be some small hihat bits in there, or a calming drum line in there. I also don't like how you used presets of VSTs in there. Some things are too loud, also. The sound starts distorting around 1:40. You need to tone down the piano at certain parts.

I did however like that it was a remix of Canon, possibly my favourite piano solo piece ever made. I liked the arpegiations in there too. Very nice.

Keep trying, you'll soon be a great musician.

~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you please check my latest song, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks!

Mushroomhead18nc responds:

heres my thought on the drums.. I actually had a hi-hat and cymbal and soft kick line built for this but it didnt seem right to put it in the song.. Because it felt like it needed more drums if I were to use just a hat and kick so i decided not to do drums with it.. thanks for the review though and actual critisicm.. not just saying hey its good or hey its bad.. i appreciate that

Beautiful work!

This piece is amazing.

I don't know what bad to say with this except I didn't really liked the modulated synth at 2:45. To me, it took away some of the epic feel to this song.

Thanks for letting me know this was up. :D

~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you please check my lastest song, One Final Goodbye, for me?

Terror-Proof responds:

your right about the main synth i used at the end i listen to it though and though again and it kinda does ruin the song.

Not bad.

Nice drums & bass! They suit the mood of the song pretty well. :)

The only thing I would suggest would be to stop using FL Studio or Vanguard presets. Everyone uses them. Try making your own. It's more fun than going through a damn list to find a sound.

~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: Could you please check my latest song, Once Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks! :D

Oh no, FL Studio presets!

Dude, you need to get some sample packs & stuff for a better sound. Try VIP Zone for some soundfonts & samples.

Other than that, I absolutely loved what you did with this. It just needs a little bit of mastering, and I would also add in a breakdown after all of that & then in there add a new melody or something. Y'know, just to diversify everything.

Just thought I could give you some tips.

~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: Could you please check my newest submission, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks in advance! :D

Rawmin responds:

Just so you know, I actually only used one preset, and that was the pad that can be heard after the intro. Everything else I made myself, and the drums were from a sample pack I downloaded.

Thank you!

This is me themesong! Lol!

I liked what you did with this, mixing anthem trance with chiptunes. You did a very nice job with it too. I just didn't like the end, with the Super Mario theme. I know you were trying to add something from a video gam,e in there, but I think the "Niiiiiintendo .... wohoooo!" at the beginning was enough. Other than that, this is possibly my favourite song ever made.

Very nice job!

~Zariah X-POSED~

PS: If you get the chance, could you please check my newest track, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks! :D

SkyMarshall responds:

You didnt like the ending? I laughed hard when sequencing that :) And thanks, and ofcourse I will check out your new track :)

Hardstyle vocals in trance?

Dude! You need to stop using those vocals in there! They don't fit. The song besides that was really great though. Make more, just get better vocals.

Hardstyle should be left hardstyle. It shouldn't be put into this genre of trance.

Just criticism, don't yell at me. Lol.
~Zariah X-POSED~

TMM43 responds:

Ha, it's perfectly alright. And, I completely agree. I'll use different vocals from now on.

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked the song!

Lol, club mix!

Really nice inroduction. It really kept me interested. Once the first synth comes in with the melody, I get this unusually euphoric feeling. Once you get to the breakdown & add in the pad, I just want to hear it more. I liked the bass you used, too. I liked how instead of using a snare for the buildup, you used the kick.

Once the beat comes back in, I have this urge to draw a happy or emotional picture. You work miracles, you know that? Another breakdown! :)

I liked in there that you used the lead as a pad instead, and you used the first synth for another melody that uses the same lines at the main melody.

The song's starting to calm down now. The lead filters out, the bass leaves, & then the kick leaves.

Overall, this was a very amazing track, I don't care what anyone says. It was perfect to me.

~Zariah X-POSED~

Terror-Proof responds:

HAHA fuck yeah club mix ftw

Holy shit man thats an awesome review i really liked what you said about the "euphoric Feeling" and how i "work mircales"

Im glad you like ti so much man but i honestly dont think im that good yet ive monly been doing this for a year.

Cheers anyways.

d[XwX]b Check my old account, "DJ-DaVinster", for crappier music I've made. XD

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