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Hardstyle has a hard kick & a reverse bass, with a lead that has conflicting sound waves with a bunch of effects. This is just distorted FX kicks with a drum loop. Nice attempt, not exactly my kind of hardstyle.
Thanks for reading,
~ Hitorti (Zariah)
PS: If you haven't already, could you check my latest song out? Thanks in advance!
Author's Response:
Weeeellll depends.....
I wasnt attempting at hardstyle, more of techno.
And I did check out your latest song, just didnt review it yet, I'm waiting to be in the reviewing mood to give a good one... or a semi-good one
thx for the review
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This is a really great track. The bass, synths, drums, etc. fit very very nicely. This is very professional sounding. If you're not signed yet, you definately will be soon.
Thanks for reading,
~Zariah
PS: Can you please check out my latest track, Summer Nights, if you get the time? Thanks in advance!
PPS: Someday I would like to remix this track. I will PM you with my email, please send me a MIDI of the melody.
Author's Response:
Cool thx. Let me situate some things and I will get to you eventually.
Ill get everything ready for you when you give me your PM.
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I agree with F-777. All this needs is some arps, and maybe a little more sound with the bass, if you know what I mean (Not more volume, just a higher pitched synth to back it up a bit).
Yeah, I dunno what else to say, sorry.
~Zariah~
Author's Response:
Dont be sorry, cuz I dont know what to say back ;P.
Thx for the review!
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Do you have a problem with gays?
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This was funny, first time I heard it. Then it got oddly ironic.
~Zariah~
PS: Can you please check my latest song, Energy, if you have the time? Thanks in advance!
Author's Response:
Hes really nice
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This is very nice. I don't like how there's a hihat on every 2 steps in the beat though. The vocals are a tad quiet, too.
I liked the acid arpegiation you used in there. It fit nicely, as I can never get acid synths to fit into my pieces.
The end... *Sigh* Vanguard preset? I thought you were better than that! XD
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you check my latest piece, Energy, for me? Thanks in advance!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I didn't notice your review :P
Agreed, this song is actually crap :D
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Before I start the review, I just have to say sorry for not reviewing sooner. XD
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I like the bell synth in the intro. It gave the track a tribal feel. Once you get past the snare buildup, there's a wood sort of sound. I like that.
I like the variations in melodies. Around 2:30, a new synth comes in, which makes me think of some epic seen from a video game (lol). Very nice job.
I don't like how you filtered out the ending. Not great for trance.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you check my latest track, Energy, and if you have time, my first D&B in a while, The Core, for me? Thanks! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah I agree, I've never been to great with endings...
Thanks for the great review! I'll check those songs out right now.
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I definately like this piece. All you need is to fix some volume levels on the gated synth, maybe a tad quieter. I also liked the bass line, how it's not the old kick-bass-kick-bass kind of thing. That isn't really great for a dance club or something, but it's definately original.
I like the lead you filter it at 3:00. Once you bring the piece to the climax, I just start feeling energetic & somewhat happy. Really nice job at that.
I don't like how you used FL Keys at 4:19. You need to find a good soundfont somewhere on Google for that. That's what I did, & my pieces sound better than if they had the damn Keys in there.
I also like how this piece loops. Great work!
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Can you please check my latest piece, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks in advance! :D
Author's Response:
You are right about the Volume, It doesn't fit in with the rest of the song. Thx for the liking of the bassline! I was thinking that it would be boring with k-b-k-b-k-b-k-b so i made k-b-k-b-k-b-k-b-k-b-k-b-k-b-b XD. It was definently meant to be made like that, with the climax. I should go find a SF2 like you said. I'll go check out ur peice right now!
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Dude, DON'T UPT THAT DAMN INTRO IN YOUR MUSIC EVER AGAIN! That's like... Worse than me when I was starting out. o_O
After that, it gets really good. You better not've used someone elses song there, or I'll hunt you down & rip your eyes out. XD
Sorry this review couldn't've been better, I'm pretty busy ATM.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Can you please check my latest song, One Final Goodye, for me if you haven't already? Thanks in advance!
Author's Response:
I think its alright now to say that that intro was supposed to bethere lol for a test to see if people would listen to the whole song, I can see you listen to the whole song b4 reviewing. Thx!
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This is an amazing piece. Great work, I especially like the transition at 3:10, as you said, it just gives me a good feeling of accomplishment.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: If you haven't already (I can't remember if you did, lol), could you please check out my latest track, One Final Goodye, for me? Thanks!
Author's Response:
I've listened to it a few times 5ing it each time actually :P.
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I don't like how there's no percussion, there could atleast be some small hihat bits in there, or a calming drum line in there. I also don't like how you used presets of VSTs in there. Some things are too loud, also. The sound starts distorting around 1:40. You need to tone down the piano at certain parts.
I did however like that it was a remix of Canon, possibly my favourite piano solo piece ever made. I liked the arpegiations in there too. Very nice.
Keep trying, you'll soon be a great musician.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you please check my latest song, One Final Goodbye, for me? Thanks!
Author's Response:
heres my thought on the drums.. I actually had a hi-hat and cymbal and soft kick line built for this but it didnt seem right to put it in the song.. Because it felt like it needed more drums if I were to use just a hat and kick so i decided not to do drums with it.. thanks for the review though and actual critisicm.. not just saying hey its good or hey its bad.. i appreciate that
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