Hmm...
Hey there, I saw that you reviewed my old account (DJ-DaVinster) collaboration with Chiron (Now x-Exodus-X). I decided to come here and review your song since I felt like I could help you out.
First off, I can see you use FL Studio. Presets, eh? Get some packs from VIP Zone or something & You'll sound a lot better.
I don't know what you were going for with this. It was breakbeat-ish at the beginning, the it goes out into trance... Hmmm... It's also incredibly repetitive. You need to make your own melodies that go along the lines of Basshunter's.
I liked the variation in the instruments. It made it sound alright. I also liked the bass.
By the end of the song, I had a headache because of all the repetitiveness. I learned to add more melodies into music the hard way, listening to one of my old songs that was really repetitive. It hurt.
I'm sorry if I offended you in any way, I was just criticizing your work.
~Zariah X-POSED~
PS: Could you check my latest song out please? I need publication somewhere! XD
PPS: If you need tips, or want to collaborate sometime, PM me. :)